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So first off, not my cup of tea so take what I say with a grain of salt...To avoid spoilers, lets just say that this story is missing some tags. Like "Tragedy
Not sure about you but I sure don't want to read something with these tags so adios amigos...An*lAdopted ProtagonistAge ProgressionAlchemyAnimal CharacteristicsAntihero ProtagonistAppearance ChangesArmy BuildingArtifact CraftingArtifactsBeastsBeautiful Female LeadBloodlinesBody TemperingCalm ProtagonistConfident ProtagonistCultivationCunning ProtagonistDao ComprehensionDeath of Loved OnesDemonic Cultivation TechniqueDemonsDestiny Determined ProtagonistEnemies Become LoversEvil ProtagonistFast CultivationF*llatioGodsHandsome Male LeadHard-Working ProtagonistHarem-seeking ProtagonistHarsh TrainingHeavenly TribulationHiding True IdentityHuman-Nonhuman RelationshipImmortalsInscriptionsLucky ProtagonistMale ProtagonistMisunderstandingsMonstersMultiple IdentitiesMultiple RealmsMysterious PastOlder Love InterestsParallel WorldsPast Plays a Big RolePetsPill ConcoctingPolygamyProtagonist with Multiple BodiesR*pe Victim Becomes LoverReincarnationRevengeReverse R*peRomantic SubplotRoyaltyR*peRuthless ProtagonistSchemes And ConspiraciesS*xual Cultivation TechniqueS*ave HaremS*avesSpirit AdvisorTime TravelWarsWeak to Strong
Love it , the MC is true to his personality, some of his decision might be cold, but hey, if you put a little thought, he's just a rational and reasonable man, and using his brain all the time if you put in the same situation
If youre the type that likes reading VR related stories then try this out. There are some errors in grammars but it is still understandable. Also the Author's native language is not english.The story itself is original. Having no binding class will let characters choose what's really useful or what they want to play.
(Kei) "Lord, we own 9 small businesses and one medium sized business. The small ones are 4 Groceries, 2 Tailors, 1 Herbalist, 1 Restaurant and Jin's Blacksmith. The Medium sized business is a sweet shop called Amaguriama."
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