Rise Of The Eternal Monarch

Excellent fight scenes. The fight is actually what brought me in, even though there are a slight bit of writing errors, the author made sure to keep us hooked up with his story. The background of the story is simple and best.
But the only thing I would say is that from the next time, make sure you give a slow start to your novel.
All the best author.

Really love how the fights were written. It's clear and well described.
It's not confusing. Great first chapter. Keep up the good work. I’m sure we’ll find out more about the world soon enough. Only complaint, the book cover and the story feels like it didn't match that well