Rise of the Cosmic_Emperor

Man of few words. Nice work//////////

So this is my first novel and I want to be shameless but I will be serious with it and I hope you give it a chance

I like the premise so far, and it’s obvious that the author has thought a lot about the world and characters and has planned it out really well. My only critique is that there are a lot of sentences without periods and mission capitalization. It’s still a pretty good story though :)

I already wrote a review however as it seems author really wants it, I have decided to write a more detailed one.
So far the story is nice and shows a lot of promise as well as some little bits of what is to come.
The author is clearly still an ******* and as such I wish to cut him some slack.
Try to keep it up and write longer chapters.

Boring parody of Profane Prince of Domination
It took the author 200+ chapters to finish the story in the first city. (It was very boring)
if you want a strong MC this book is not for you, you better re-read Profane Prince of Domination
The number of power stones shows that this is a very sad story.

good novel, at first I did not give much faith, since it had a few bad reviews, but the only thing I can say is that I do not regret giving it a try, if you want to compare this story with another as a guide I would say that the profane prince,  but obviously different, obviously recommended and as you can see the story has for many chapters yet, we just have to hope that the author never leaves us like most :( **: I would like you to be able to better describe the characters since the spoken features are very  Lazy and we don't have enough to imagine them, it would also be nice if you at least gave each girl a name, even if you only name her once because everything is like saying mmm very empty

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