This probably got picked because the mtl is already readable so the entire book can be easily edited to milk money.Anyways it goes even more cringe with the bashing of other countries like Korea, Japan, Western countries, etc. You know how Chyna Numba 1 stories go.Ignoring that, there are literally no compelling characters. MC is basically emotionless for the reader to project on to, and all the side characters are beautiful women. Gets old and tiring really quickly. Villains are literally cardboard cartoon cutouts. In fact the MC is a better villain than the actual villains with how he acts (ie: psychopathic and sociopathic).
so far pretty the story is interesting, the main character becomes a bit of an edgy teen after 50 or so chapters, and there's the stupid thing that every mc in these kind of novels casually knows the formula for every element in the periodic table and can imagine atoms combining to make a element while never making a mistake (which I find quit unrealistic and it takes you out of the story), the world and character building is decently interesting, there are very few grammatical mistakes, but overall a fun read
It's a really good novel. Story progresses slow in this novel. You have to be patient to enjoy the story. Sexual tensions and scenes are hot. Definitely Recommend it to read it.
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