I think this is one of the only times I’ve given such a bad review. I’m just mad at the novel seeming like it has potential but ruining it from even chapter 1-horrible writing quality(unnecessary repeating of what is said to bloat chapters)(the writing style is also awful since it is all just monologue after monologue) there is literally no emphasis on what is happening, so we are 25 chapters through and he has done almost nothing, he has just woken up for his second day.-adding wayyy tooo many anime “inspirations” that it makes the power system a mess(btw it is even blatantly copying people and powers from anime’s)The worse part of it is the combination of powers from each anime apparently Nen is mana and can be combined with devil fruits to produce an explosion reactionDevil fruits-forbidden fruitBlackbeard- forgot his alternate nameMonkey d dragon- something d somethingHaki-forgot something about soul attacksShadow monarch-dark sovereignDjinn from magi-djinn from magiNen hxh- NenOverlordBlack clover books-black clover booksEtc these are just the ones on top of my head
sigh. this novel is like a face slapping one in how the entire world is formatted into making the mc look the best at all times. there's no substance here. ignore the cool concept of a puppet system, this mc is your generic Chinese mc with nothing special about him. the plot is for the sole purpose of benefiting the mc and making him look godlike and amazing at all times.
My gosh, your writing is explicit and the background is well explained. The characters were well taken care of. Your command of language is impeccable... I will save and read from the app to give chapter and paragraph reviews..nice job...
I am very pleased to see such an amazing novel! It was so good that I didn't know that I have already read a few chapters! The characters were very lifelike and realistic. With emotions to let us see their character. The plot was steadily building up and it was nice! The worldbuilding was vast and detailed. I like how you explain the nooks and crannies in your craft. Overall, It was easy to get lost in your novel as it was very immersive! I will wait for your work to reach a million views and that will be pleasing to the eyes! Kudos and good luck! Peace ✌️
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