It's a good story and have fun elements also. it's from other perspective of story where villain have also role for its character. It's all good just time flies realy fast man 2.5k years have gone in the story if disciples go for experience then they came after decades not just 1 or 2 years. In this I really feel that they are really cultivators have long life but I think it's also too much dude 100 years are ok but 2.5k seems to long with their talent and resources. All in all it's a good story.
I got as far as chapter 11 I know it might be too few chapters before judging, but I doubt it.
Three main issue
1)Too simple
2) Too convenient
3)Too fast-paced.
within 10 chapters, he reaches the 4th realm of cultivation for this world, finds a disciple, and kills all bandits who are at the 2nd realm of this worlds cultivation, helps a city lord from an invasion in which a demonic cultivator of the 3rd realm of cultivation helps said people invading and then while fishing stumble upon the strongest sect master in the country of which the mc than joins said sect all within 10 chapters, chapters are average in length.
Chapter 11 is what killed it for me, I know the system was going to make it easy for the mc but this way too easy all he does is check in every day and it gives him random stuff.
Good points
-writing is alright some words and grammar here and there needs work but it's very readable.
-characters are the strong point of this story the mc is actually fun to read, his little disciple is as well, and their interactions are fun. Even the talking system is cool I know most find them annoying and with good reason, but his system seems to be a cool bro and not a jerk.
It’s a fairly decent novel overall. While the concept is pretty good, it’s also very standard and nothing truly amazing happens in the novel. The writing quality is readable but with plenty of mistakes each chapter. The biggest problem with the story is it just feels lazy, there’s many strange decisions, errors and problems that are in this novel that probably shouldn’t be, in addition the author doesn’t really seem to care about any of that. It’s good for a free novel, but it would not be worth paying for compared to almost any other cultivation novel
Mc is master of disciples and also has system. So system magically provides back all the resources that mc used on his disciples, and they all become very strong. And for stupid reasons, protagonists mentioned by system, are all stupid..
So dont waste time on this.
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Three main issue
1)Too simple
2) Too convenient
3)Too fast-paced.
within 10 chapters, he reaches the 4th realm of cultivation for this world, finds a disciple, and kills all bandits who are at the 2nd realm of this worlds cultivation, helps a city lord from an invasion in which a demonic cultivator of the 3rd realm of cultivation helps said people invading and then while fishing stumble upon the strongest sect master in the country of which the mc than joins said sect all within 10 chapters, chapters are average in length.
Chapter 11 is what killed it for me, I know the system was going to make it easy for the mc but this way too easy all he does is check in every day and it gives him random stuff.
Good points
-writing is alright some words and grammar here and there needs work but it's very readable.
-characters are the strong point of this story the mc is actually fun to read, his little disciple is as well, and their interactions are fun. Even the talking system is cool I know most find them annoying and with good reason, but his system seems to be a cool bro and not a jerk.
Mc is master of disciples and also has system. So system magically provides back all the resources that mc used on his disciples, and they all become very strong. And for stupid reasons, protagonists mentioned by system, are all stupid..
So dont waste time on this.
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