Revenge will be mine

I am sensing a fine character development from our author. Also, that it will be mind blowing. Humor is perfect and the story telling is fabulous. I hope that the author will not be slacking off and instead will be up onto the next chapters. Also, I am the manager of this account. I am not the author.

not really a review but more of a plea for more,so please author make more chapters but I do understand the time to create a good story

An inspiring tale of Cleiton, a 14-year-old from Brazil's favelas, chasing his dream to become a soccer legend. Hope he ends up at São Paulo FC, the greatest!

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It's a good book. There are quite a few grammar mistakes like the fact that 'it' is replaced be 'her' a lot and it made it a bit confusing at first but once I got used to it, it wasn't that bad. In the first few chapters there is also a serious lack of dialogue for the characters but once the author realized, the problem was fixed in the later chapters.Now the story itself. I had been looking for a couple system novel for quite a while and I couldn't find one so I was really excited when I found this one. The chapters when they first got the systems were really good, I won't go into details cuz of spoilers, but it was a bit extra but not too much so I enjoyed it. I expected a lot more romance than I got but I guess the romance will start when they get back to Earth which I'm fine with. I just feel like their affection rate increased without them actually getting closer. I'm really hoping that the romance picks up once they get back home.Also I want more dialogue between Idan and Arabel, I want to see them talking more and getting closer instead of it happening in the background and you just say something like 'after going for a walk and talking, the couple had grown closer'. I want to see what they said to each other, that would make the romance between them a bit more real to us instead of just increasing the percentage in the systems.