Okay so... I need to read more but so far it is a very rough story. I'm two chapters in and there are already a ridiculous amount issues. Grammer for one, using male pronouns instead of female and confusing the reader is a big one. There are also already some plot issues I see on the horizon. Honestly, I think that the premise is good but it just needs more work and thought. Could also use someone to go through and help with grammar. I will try to continue and may update the review if there is any improvement in quality, character depth, or flow vs forced plot.
well one word . if you are a masochist, wants to be mentally tortured this is for you!!! this is the first time ii m going to do a bad review and did not even last 2-3 chapters . the story has a lot of potential especially in world building but bro!!! you gotta ruin it with the mc stupidity ! might as well make him normal teenager not reincarnator. mc is projecting the character of a loser and you are telling me he is a young paragon it past life? i am not gonna continue reading this but for those who are curious check till the end . the only advantage here is the update stability and potential world background .
This is one of those books that his your in due to the story simplicity, something to take the edge of. This is until you are met with a confused MC who one minute understand the cultivation world while the next he's a virgin MC from anime (I've really never understood those mc, you build harem of girls who are throwing themselves at but you still continue the virgin streak. like 'reinacarnated with a smartphone in another world').
The guy has the attitude that he's better than everyone else, when he meets the little price, when he meets the Yue clan descendant, .... never read past that.
one moment he's saying he's not a good person when planning to steal the people's resources the next he's disgusted by possessing a bandit. You have to remember this is a person who has already walked the cultivation path once before to the second highest realm.
overall even his breakthrough don't feel like an achievement at all.
So far it has been a good read, it's hard lately to find a good novel with both system and cultivation in it. and I guess the fact it's connected to modern world will also be a bonus. will this novel only focus on the cultivation side or will it also touch the modern world?
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The guy has the attitude that he's better than everyone else, when he meets the little price, when he meets the Yue clan descendant, .... never read past that.
one moment he's saying he's not a good person when planning to steal the people's resources the next he's disgusted by possessing a bandit. You have to remember this is a person who has already walked the cultivation path once before to the second highest realm.
overall even his breakthrough don't feel like an achievement at all.
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