Skip to the chapter 15... the juicy part starts from there if you're not into the slow pacing.
Author is super wholesome. Makes everything more welcoming compare to the like of "My Vampire/Warewolf System".
It's the novel with the best world-building that I've found on this app. It has good humour, not cringe s***, and you have a good time even if you only read a chapter. The author seems to read most of the comments and listens to reader's questions and doubts. Not only this is an 10/10 novel, but it also has a 10/10 author.
I mean, this is the highest review I've given this site so yeah.
I really like this story so far, the pacing is rather slow, but it really helps flesh out the world. There are so many stories where stuff is mentioned but never ever expanded upon, but here it all has a nice flow where each thing comes in phases and is never left in the dirt as the plot progresses. The characters are incredibly well written and you seem super connected with the readers and the stuff that you bring in is very realistic for this day and age, like the streaming system.
Personally, for improvements I'd like, I'll be honest, I'm a sucker for love interests, so I'd like to see some of that. Another small complaint is the lore of the game. MC was introduced as a lore hunter, yet for most of the story we just have hunting, and grinding and then some plot and back to hunting. Don't get it twisted, as I really enjoy the fights, they feel well thought out, but they stretch on a bit too much sometimes. I'd like to see more interactions between him and the other characters, unless they aren't directly affecting the plot you had in mind, so do whatever. The conversations he has with people about the game or what he thinks of it always get cut short. He talks with Donovan in the car sometimes but there's no dialogue about what he thought about it, we just get a one liner before he's back to doing his stuff.
Overall, the story's great. I really enjoy it and I hope to see it hitting the WebNovel charts soon! Thanks for the novel!
I am through chapter 150 so far and this is definitely one of the top novels in this genre - an excellent debut, author. :)
The string writing sells it the most for me, as the story is easy to follow and get engrossed in, and the story itself has been very entertaining without relying on lame gimmicks like so many other stories in this category. Very well done, please keep it up!
Currently just entering the 100's and I have to say it's been a good read, this kind of book is right up my alley in terms of how it's made and such. I personally really enjoy the soul system, it gives a bit of spice and random to the mix, which I again, really enjoy. I also saw some complaints on the combat and stuff from fellow reviews, and can say that to me the length felt fine, I like the added and bonus details, not saying they don't have a point though, but to me it felt fine. And also, I do personally like the characters, and while yes, to some it may feel like their just there to be there and such, to me they feel human, and that I love. So overall it's great in my book, and one I look forward to reading. It also feels like your taking reviewers advice into consideration author when it's helpful, which I say thank you to, as not many authors do so. But overall, it's been a great read so far and I look forwards to more.
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Author is super wholesome. Makes everything more welcoming compare to the like of "My Vampire/Warewolf System".
I really like this story so far, the pacing is rather slow, but it really helps flesh out the world. There are so many stories where stuff is mentioned but never ever expanded upon, but here it all has a nice flow where each thing comes in phases and is never left in the dirt as the plot progresses. The characters are incredibly well written and you seem super connected with the readers and the stuff that you bring in is very realistic for this day and age, like the streaming system.
Personally, for improvements I'd like, I'll be honest, I'm a sucker for love interests, so I'd like to see some of that. Another small complaint is the lore of the game. MC was introduced as a lore hunter, yet for most of the story we just have hunting, and grinding and then some plot and back to hunting. Don't get it twisted, as I really enjoy the fights, they feel well thought out, but they stretch on a bit too much sometimes. I'd like to see more interactions between him and the other characters, unless they aren't directly affecting the plot you had in mind, so do whatever. The conversations he has with people about the game or what he thinks of it always get cut short. He talks with Donovan in the car sometimes but there's no dialogue about what he thought about it, we just get a one liner before he's back to doing his stuff.
Overall, the story's great. I really enjoy it and I hope to see it hitting the WebNovel charts soon! Thanks for the novel!
The string writing sells it the most for me, as the story is easy to follow and get engrossed in, and the story itself has been very entertaining without relying on lame gimmicks like so many other stories in this category. Very well done, please keep it up!
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They're all trash every last one of them
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