This is a very interesting start. The setting is amazing I love it when humanity is close to losing.
The characters are vibrant and unique, it's really hard not to picture them while they talk and interact with each other.
Even with the small lore dump in CH 5 where the author introduces many characters the story doesn't miss a beat in its delivery.
And the simple way it's written helps a lot to read without getting tired]
This is not the type of book I would generally be reading. Nonetheless, this started out really well, and the current amount of chapters is not sufficient to leave a proper review. The grammar requires correction at parts. Good luck!
I really like science fiction so I'm glad I discovered this story. Mixing sci-fi with high fantasy is very orginal.
The beggining sequence in the lab is mindblowing.
I really liked Silas and the creation of his character. Definitely my fave so far.
I can't really say anything about the grammar and spelling but have not spotted any mistakes. I like your writing style - you can deliver complicated scenes in very clear way which is great for a non-native speaker like me.
I wish this story success. Keep going!
Sci-fi genre needs a lot of mental theories and on top of that, creativity. So, not everyone could pull off such a genre. Mixing magic with science is a unique concept that the author has used. Worth a try!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Sci-fi has never been a particular interest of mine. I prefer literature, the works of Dickens, Austen, Shakespeare, Poe, Stevenson, etc. But I absolutely fell in love with this story. Well-written, well-developed, and well-paced; it's nearly perfect. Each chapter never fails to keep you enthralled and wanting more. You can form connections with the characters, and clearly envision everything that goes on. Truly a worthy and enjoyable read!
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The characters are vibrant and unique, it's really hard not to picture them while they talk and interact with each other.
Even with the small lore dump in CH 5 where the author introduces many characters the story doesn't miss a beat in its delivery.
And the simple way it's written helps a lot to read without getting tired]
The beggining sequence in the lab is mindblowing.
I really liked Silas and the creation of his character. Definitely my fave so far.
I can't really say anything about the grammar and spelling but have not spotted any mistakes. I like your writing style - you can deliver complicated scenes in very clear way which is great for a non-native speaker like me.
I wish this story success. Keep going!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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