EndlessMTL Translation made my head hurt so much....This novel would have been average with a good translation but with this trashy one i can't even read ....
most everything was average and cliche. That, in and of itself, isn't a bad thing, so long as the characters are well developed and the writing skillful.Unfortunately, both the characters are writing quality are bad. The writing quality was mildly irritating, with the bad Grammer and exposition being handled very poorly.The characters were by far the worst part of this book, and the reason I dropped it. The characters didn't feel one but like people; rather, they were one dimensional and seemed to lack any complexity or realism.For example, the all men except for MC are villains, irresponsible, or lusty pigs. One girl (at the beginning) was the vain, big breasted onee-chan that instantly falls for the main character when he saves her. MC is a do gooder with a shop. He failed to be interesting, at least to me.
VOTE!!!....its a magic related novel so VOTE!!!....we need some more of those here......................................................................................................................
I enjoyed it. I wish I could write like this. this is what made me want to do science and look at stars and planets. this story was made in 1912. and it discovered the black hole.
Stronger from a sapling. This is a copy of that novel with some color changes on the characters...............................................................................................................................................................
I see that the story is discontinued probably because it's missing a lot of details. I love overpowered stories like this, but it's like you went to one subject to the next without hardly any context. You need to add more details to the characters and what he's doing. where's the villain of story you mentioned a tyrant magician, but I can hardly believe if he is attacking nearby territories that he would simply leave the mc alone to build his kingdom? I get that it appears that you're trying to create a slice of life story, but you are too fast. Keep jumping from one thing after another with hardly any details. if you plan on redoing this book, I suggest that you make sure that there are details in the novel.
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