I liked the story. First I will talk about the things I liked, then I will talk about the shortcomings.The characters are well thought out. -The world background has an interesting and understandable layout.-The features of the system are well thought out and easy to understand. -The battle scenes are satisfactorily descriptive.Here are the points that I find missing.-It's a well thought out novel, but overall I found it a bit lacking in depth. Although mc has a painful and difficult past and says he can't trust people, he doesn't quite fit in.From my point of view, it would be more reasonable for a person who has been so hurt and bullied to be a little unstable when trying to get stronger for revenge.So I think a more wild personality should have come to the fore instead of unnecessary stuffing for it to be cool.I don't feel that mc has a completely distrustful image of the ducks chasing him according to his past life we learned.I liked the novel overall, better than other cliche reincarnation system novels.
This book is not my typical genre, but I think it's well done. The characters have clear personalities and the pacing is very natural. I can see how the story will get very interesting as more arcs are introduced.
I got it wrong in my previous comment (thought it was a shop novel, at least not yet), but I have to sayyy: It's really good!!! You can clearly see it was edited (unlike those other novels), other than Barett's name changing to Brett sometimes (which is not really bothering), there's no problem. The story is really funny aswell, had a good laugh in the early chapters. I recommend it!
When are you going to finish writing this? Or at least continue writing this? It's been around 3 months since last update. I thoroughly enjoy this book, by far one of my favorites that I have read on Webnovel. The characters are all very well written and fleshed out and the plot is captivating. I love that it bleeds into both worlds and brings some excitement to each.
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I honestly don't know where to start, I would like to start by saying I had low expectations for this novel but god damn was I surprised.Everything about this is just amazing, the world, the characters, the events that happen and even the MC. This is so good that i'm checking for a chapter update every 2 hours, im addicted!
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