I have nothing against bl. I love the genre. But this story needs an editor really bad. And there's a lot of confusion. There isn't enough detail to fully understand things.
This story pretty well written and I really like the main character in this story. Also I love revenge story’s so this a great story for those who like a revenge story.
Okay I just read to chapter six and in all honesty I’m not gonna read any further untill some editing has been done since it has been devolved into the level of a machine translated story I feel like if the author can fix the mistakes the story would be quite good but honestly the grammatical errors and the fact that the way it’s written is similar to how a child who has just started speaking talks is ruining this for me
There are words missing incorrect tense used spelling mistakes while not many from what I could tell are still there I really want to like this story but untill it has been edited HEAVILY I might add I will not be returning I don’t mind that it’s bl and transmigration type stories are one of my favourites I sincerely hope the author will take an editor into consideration since he has decided to write a novel in English
I have only read one chapter so far so I will be sure to update this review in the future
The grammar spelling mistakes incorrect words etc break the flow of the story as I have to stop myself sometimes and try and figure out what is actually being said
I also feel that the first chapter moves very quickly with very little world building or any build up whatsoever which I feel is necessary since unlike quick wear world hopping novels this is different
I appreciate that the authors first language isn’t English however the use of an editor or someone to look it over and make sure that the errors are caught and remedied would make this story much better
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There are words missing incorrect tense used spelling mistakes while not many from what I could tell are still there I really want to like this story but untill it has been edited HEAVILY I might add I will not be returning I don’t mind that it’s bl and transmigration type stories are one of my favourites I sincerely hope the author will take an editor into consideration since he has decided to write a novel in English
The grammar spelling mistakes incorrect words etc break the flow of the story as I have to stop myself sometimes and try and figure out what is actually being said
I also feel that the first chapter moves very quickly with very little world building or any build up whatsoever which I feel is necessary since unlike quick wear world hopping novels this is different
I appreciate that the authors first language isn’t English however the use of an editor or someone to look it over and make sure that the errors are caught and remedied would make this story much better
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