BOOK 1 WAS GREAT. I FEEL LIKE SHE RUSHED BOOK 2, BUT WITH HER RECENT EDITS, IT LOOKS GREAT TOO. PLEASE, DON'T CONDEMN THE AUTHOR AS SHE EXPLAINED, SHE SUBMITTED THE CHAPTERS IN BULK AND HAS EDITED THE CHAPTERS. I DON'T THINK WE SHOULD LITTER HER BOOK WITH BAD REVIEWS WITHOUT READING THE EDITS
It's all good, maybe you needed time to phrase you words. It's kinda what I need now to. Also I too should've been more clear and I still don't know how to express it. I just know that it's not that I'm against harem novels. I just can't stand the lack of communication not just between the mc and the fl, but all the love interests. And not just a bunch of words strung along to put some interactions between the ladies. But actual relationships. Big sisters, little sisters, best friends, rivals, something, anything. And I don't ever recall reading a novel that does that. If you can create real interactions between the girls then YES! I would totally be okay with harem novels. I just hope I explained it good enough. Now I understand that you can't do it at this point because they are miles apart. But I'm not trying to change your story. It's your, I'm just along for the ride. I was just expressing my thoughts on harems.However now that you point it out what you wrote about Love, Luck, and Emperor makes a lot of sense. I just interpreted it a different way. You were most likely clear enough, I'm not very good at connecting dots.I'm sorry if I made you feel troubled by my words. I wasn't trying to change the way you wrote your story.
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