Anyway, after admiring for a long time what he saw, William finally realized that something was wrong with him... He felt like there was something important he forgot.
I'd say it's a nice story, but it could use some work. There are a lot of grammatical errors, but aside from that, the story is well put together, and I really appreciate the effort you put into it. Good luck and wising you the best👍🏻
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