Well, where to begin... It certainly won't be a novel for everyone. Both the title and the beginning may discourage many people, but I think it's worth giving the author a chance because the last chapters are really great and give hope that the novel will be really good. Personally, I like how the author presents the relationships between the characters. The relationship between MC and Violetta (definitely the best female character of the series) deserves special praise. I hope that in future chapters we will have the opportunity to see her more often.From the comments of other people I can conclude that the author presents the fight scenes very well. Personally, I usually skip half of the description, so in this matter I can only rely on the opinion of others, and they are very positive.As far as the quality of writing goes, I have no major complaints. Reading other noveles on the site, this one is certainly well above average.To sum it all up, objectively the novel deserves4 - 4.5 stars (with a lot of potential). However, I give 5 because of Violetta.
So 3 things here:1. Idk if I've been living under the rock but this is the first time I've heard about a video game novel ~ very interesting 👀2. I love the character design esp Osho as I find him handsome mehe :33. Storyline is fun, looks promising! I'm enjoying every chapter! Love your work, Author! Keep it up, cheers! 🥂
Hilariously bad.I've avoided stories with a peacock, know it all MC for a couple years now and this just reminded me why.So bad all the negative scores rolled over to 5.Hopefully you're reading this instead of going off the review rating and know not to waste your time.
this story is ok. but thats it.the concept is nothing new but still rare enough to be interesting. the execution is meh.10 chapters prologue with some stuff thats relevant, 15 chapters of different pov's that feel like filler. that leaves me with 25 out of the 50 chapters i read with actual mc plot and its bland, the mc is not really memorible. the mc just goes into a dungeon and clears it without trying, he can tame 1000 beasts of c rank and below from the very begining, its boring there is no adventure and no excitement in this adventure story.im actually struggling with the rating for this story. 5 stars is an exceptional story, 4 stars a good story. 3 stars is an ok story, 2 stars not worth wasting your time on and 1 star is trash.this story is not good enough for 3 stars but better then 2 star.so my rating is 2.7 stars.
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