dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !
I am giving this a one star just from the synopsis. Like what is the mc’s gender!? Boy or girl? Like wtf! And there were some VERY clear grammar errors showing the author didn’t even bother with the synopsis. Cough* capitalization errors. Honestly, not going to read and just going to leave a bad review. You are very welcome.
Garbage.
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King Vegeta was scared of baby broly with 10,000 bp and when he finds this mc with 320k bp and he wants to control her? garbage plot.
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Then instead of you know using brain and finding a way to stop it, MC screams at Vegeta that mc will kill him. Yeah it seems that a 3 year old attempted to write this fic because ever action that was taken was not even planned out.
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King Vegeta was scared of baby broly with 10,000 bp and when he finds this mc with 320k bp and he wants to control her? garbage plot.
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Then instead of you know using brain and finding a way to stop it, MC screams at Vegeta that mc will kill him. Yeah it seems that a 3 year old attempted to write this fic because ever action that was taken was not even planned out.
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.