- I am quite a bit tougher. Enough that I could survive the rather destructive results of typical harem shenanigans. I will never suffer crippling or lethal wounds from any of those in your harem.
- Never capitalize an entire word. Using italics, bold, full stops, commas, new lines, or capitalizing the first letter to emphasize but capitalized words are irritating to read. At most, you can capitalize loud sound effects like BAM! or THUD! but WRITING SENTENCES LIKE THIS IS ANNOYING.
I looked down at my hand, blood dripping down my fingertips from a few shards of glass that were still stuck in my palm. I let out a small hiss as I pulled a few of the smaller pieces out of my own hand. I grabbed a hold of the larger shard.
A mighty 'thwang' rang out, as Ultron caught the hammer in his hand. Turning his head slowly, he gave a small smile as the Mind Stone came to life, glowing a dangerous yellow before a beam of energy shot outward, slamming into Thor before carrying him down to the ground.
If you’re looking for a book that will make you laugh, cry, and believe in the power of love, The One I Cherish is the one for you. I’m already recommending it to all my friends!
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