Why didn't this book appear in my recommendations before???? This is seriously one of the best system based books I've read. The MC, I just somehow find him so amusing and as well as his interactions with his own "system". The synopsis is perfect! And the prologue did an incredible job at the world building. Only reading a few chapters is enough for the reader to know it's going to get better with every chapter. I'm getting immersed here, especially since there's no grammar or formatting problems as well
An amazing novel, a definite must read for all those peeps out there.
So first is writing quality, which I hope and believe is completely top tier. If it isn't then please come and get into my pants about it, cause I'm the editor and it's my job to make sure the writing is as tippy top as possible. So yeah, if they're any mistakes, you all can blame it on me. 5 stars for this of course.
Next is the stability of updates, and since this is a fairly new novel, I will only be giving it 4 stars like all the other new novels I review, as this category isn't applicable yet.
After is story development, which I think is at a pretty good pace. It's not the greatest, but it's not the worst either. Like, it doesn't make you want to read each chapter with a fervor like Solo Leveling, but it isn't a slog or a bad read. The pace is fine, and the story so far is creative and unique. A solid 4 stars.
The 4th is character design, and well, it's another 4 stars just due to the fact that the protagonist, although has his special features, is made up of like two generic stereotypes. The first is that he's a calculating guy, referred to as a prodigy a lot of times in the novel. The second is that he's courageous and will sacrifice himself to protect his comrades. So, both these make up the main character, making him pretty generic, but, what're you gonna do about it? Most characters on the platform are like this anyways, and I believe that you guys will like him. Also, don't wanna spoil, but he gets a lot more interesting as the story progresses, so read it for that.
Lastly, there's the world background, an excellent 5 stars. Honestly, this is the first time that I've heard a story like this, so full points on the uniqueness. Like, all novels on this platform are like, system this, system that, but in this one, the MC is the system, not the host. This presents a certain uniqueness that I hope you all will like.
So, overall, a pretty good novel. I would definitely recommend this to someone in passing, and I believe that it has a lot of potential.
I love this! I’ve read one other book so far like this, but they differ in amazing ways possible!
Shane is an arrogant, cocky boy who dies and now must navigate this in between world. He has a big heart though, as he saves both Frank and Tess. He also has this dark cosmic power that makes everyone around him afraid of him. Though, I don’t see him being a real threat. He seems to be aware of everything he does and doesn’t truly want to do harm to anyone as long as they don’t do harm to him or his sister.
I’m intrigued.
Great work author. The storyline is captive and unique. The world-building just blew my mind. The characters are designed well. Nothing but a good book. If u r wondering whether to read it or not...just go for it.
I'm hooked with the last sentence in synopsis with i might just try it out![img=recommend][img=update][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=fp][img=update]
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Keep going, author!!!
So first is writing quality, which I hope and believe is completely top tier. If it isn't then please come and get into my pants about it, cause I'm the editor and it's my job to make sure the writing is as tippy top as possible. So yeah, if they're any mistakes, you all can blame it on me. 5 stars for this of course.
Next is the stability of updates, and since this is a fairly new novel, I will only be giving it 4 stars like all the other new novels I review, as this category isn't applicable yet.
After is story development, which I think is at a pretty good pace. It's not the greatest, but it's not the worst either. Like, it doesn't make you want to read each chapter with a fervor like Solo Leveling, but it isn't a slog or a bad read. The pace is fine, and the story so far is creative and unique. A solid 4 stars.
The 4th is character design, and well, it's another 4 stars just due to the fact that the protagonist, although has his special features, is made up of like two generic stereotypes. The first is that he's a calculating guy, referred to as a prodigy a lot of times in the novel. The second is that he's courageous and will sacrifice himself to protect his comrades. So, both these make up the main character, making him pretty generic, but, what're you gonna do about it? Most characters on the platform are like this anyways, and I believe that you guys will like him. Also, don't wanna spoil, but he gets a lot more interesting as the story progresses, so read it for that.
Lastly, there's the world background, an excellent 5 stars. Honestly, this is the first time that I've heard a story like this, so full points on the uniqueness. Like, all novels on this platform are like, system this, system that, but in this one, the MC is the system, not the host. This presents a certain uniqueness that I hope you all will like.
So, overall, a pretty good novel. I would definitely recommend this to someone in passing, and I believe that it has a lot of potential.
Good job author!
Shane is an arrogant, cocky boy who dies and now must navigate this in between world. He has a big heart though, as he saves both Frank and Tess. He also has this dark cosmic power that makes everyone around him afraid of him. Though, I don’t see him being a real threat. He seems to be aware of everything he does and doesn’t truly want to do harm to anyone as long as they don’t do harm to him or his sister.
I’m intrigued.
Thanks for this masterpiece...
All the best author. ❤️