Not a fan of the start. Instantly becoming rich with a super car, millions in his savings account, and a billion dollar company is ridiculously cliche. Randomly loosing your job and girl friend is an annoying plot point.This novel could have been much better if it instead explored the system and picked up various unique skills good/bad and depicted his struggles for completing his occupations.I recommend skipping this novel and checking out "A Valiant Life" or "I’m Really a Superstar" if you haven't read those.
Your talent is clear hun.... writing is definitely your calling😁😁😁 I enjoyed reading your chapters and I'm hoping to read more of your work😉😉😉 Great work Author!!!
Well this is another of the racist novels on here. The story itself is decent but it plays HARD into the whole idea that foreigners are all evil. Never trust them. Seriously, they may have been part of the empire for generations but they can never hold any position of worth because you know they are evil. This is the main character's view unscripted and unprovoked that receives perfect recommendations from everyone for how wonderful of a view it is. Yea. I am done. A pity as it was relatively promising up until the Imperial Examination and the unrelenting racism/nationalism.
Usually I'm not interested in the video game stories but I absolutely loved yours. It's been a long time since any ongoing story has been able to catch so much of my attention. I would really like to see it completed.P.S. Thank you for using the cover I made for ya
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