Having spent hundreds upon hundreds of dollars on spirt stones on this site to read books I can honestly say that this book ranks in the top 5 I have ever read here.
The MC is ridiculously OP but yet not in a overbearing uninteresting way like other stories. There is humor, face slapping, a huge mystery, even some sadness. The pacing and development of both the characters are world is godly. Highly recommend this story, and prepare yourself for a rollarcoster of emotions when reading.
Hello, struggling author here. I would like to point out the things to expect from this book.
But first...After 160 chapters, I will finally leave a word here since the book is gaining more readers than I could have possibly known when I wrote it. So, to all my readers who have made it possible for my book to be here, I owe you everything. Thank you, you guys are the best.
To my new readers, here is what to expect when you decide to read this book,
The Good:
1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom.
2. I am your friend.
The Bad:
1. First dozen chapters are incredibly rough. I didn’t think it was going to get traction at all since I was a beginner writer. I won’t edit them for now, in the hopes that you see how I improved throughout the story.
2. Grammar mistakes. Usually mixing up gender pronouns since they don’t exist in my language.
2. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow.
3. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together.
4. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together.
5. Young and Unstable MC - Some of you might not like it. Our MC starts at 5 years old. He will be naïve, clueless, and not to mention, irrational. But he is and foremost, powerful. In short, he’s a time bomb.
6. Character driven – The story will always revolve around the MC.
7. Inconsistencies – I have a very short memory span.
Here's what to do before reading this book:
1. Play some music.
2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first.
3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I can do when a baby can literally fly.
4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book :( Got this from Kota btw.
I don't see how anyone can like this hes too naive it's annoying and he's getting controlled like a little *****. I do this bec gramps says so, I gotta be cute bec this goddess says so, oh he's being annoying let's let the demon god bully him
I really love this story, i ve read all the available chapters ( free ones), it made me cry it made me laugh, honestly it is really good, only the first few chapters till the story really starts are, well they re good, just not as good as the later chapters
Alright so to the review
Writing quality
Now, i really love how author wrote his story, a few grammar mistakes here and there (between he and she) but you can understand nonethless if you pay attention, but still 5 stars for the way he wrote it
Story development
Now in the first chapters till the story starts up, it s well, quite average, but after that i had no words, like i know i sound biased but this is my honest opinion, for the 73 chapters that i read at the end i had no words, it s so good, well beside in the middle of the "earth" part, that was a bit boring to me, but still 5 stars as i loved it
Character design
Now, i love the main character, the character development of him is done so so good that u don t realise till u read chapter 73,or maybe u do but you don t pay attention, just when u read chapter 73 and be like wow wtf, like srsly
I also like his big sister and friends, although not much character development over there, maybe his big sis, but it cannot compare to the main character, at all, at least my opinion, but i didn t read a story that made me like it so much so imma still give it 5 stars
Update stability
I can t comment on this, because i didn t finish the story as i read only the free chapters, but like, this is a biased vote here, but u can just ignore as it can be as wrong as it can be right, so 5 stars, only because i really love the story overall,
World background
Now i was really immersed in the story that i didn t really pay that much attention to actually write a review about it like, i know where the story happens, where they are everytime, but i can t write a detail review about it, but yeah as above, i still give 5 stars, honestly the background was enough for me, i understood everything that was going on.
I know the review is quite biased as i really loved it, but i know now that not everyone will that s for certain, so if someone reads my review, take that in mind too, always don t have high expectations as u would really enjoy it more, i mean i avoided this novel when i first saw it just because i thought it s some normal cultivation cliche and look at me now
honestly I don't even know what to say about this story it was most definitely the best story I've ever read had plot twists that I never could have even imagined and so much more the ending was truly unexpected to me and honestly it was the best possible ending there could have been I loved how it all closed together honestly I hope the author continues his writing because thus far I have to say the absolute best writer I have ever read from if there was a possibility to give more stars to the story I would because it was absolutely amazing. p.s I recommend you read the entire story even the parts where it gets slow and parts where you don't want to because once you make it to the end it'll be worth it
Greetings, this is the author again. This story is actually done, so you will be reading a novel with an actual ending. I did, however, end it in a way that I could continue it if ever I wished to-- just in case enough readers request it.
This story is very close to my heart, as it is actually the first ever book that Webnovel took a liking to enough to have it contracted. I was a literal newbie in writing when I wrote this story, but I hope you like it as much as I loved writing it. Thank you!
Good book, fun to read, and definitely makes you get hyped for the next chapter. Overall probably my favorite book on this app along with I Alone Level Up (Solo Leveling)
Popular Reviews
The MC is ridiculously OP but yet not in a overbearing uninteresting way like other stories. There is humor, face slapping, a huge mystery, even some sadness. The pacing and development of both the characters are world is godly. Highly recommend this story, and prepare yourself for a rollarcoster of emotions when reading.
But first...After 160 chapters, I will finally leave a word here since the book is gaining more readers than I could have possibly known when I wrote it. So, to all my readers who have made it possible for my book to be here, I owe you everything. Thank you, you guys are the best.
To my new readers, here is what to expect when you decide to read this book,
The Good:
1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom.
2. I am your friend.
The Bad:
1. First dozen chapters are incredibly rough. I didn’t think it was going to get traction at all since I was a beginner writer. I won’t edit them for now, in the hopes that you see how I improved throughout the story.
2. Grammar mistakes. Usually mixing up gender pronouns since they don’t exist in my language.
2. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow.
3. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together.
4. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together.
5. Young and Unstable MC - Some of you might not like it. Our MC starts at 5 years old. He will be naïve, clueless, and not to mention, irrational. But he is and foremost, powerful. In short, he’s a time bomb.
6. Character driven – The story will always revolve around the MC.
7. Inconsistencies – I have a very short memory span.
Here's what to do before reading this book:
1. Play some music.
2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first.
3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I can do when a baby can literally fly.
4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book :( Got this from Kota btw.
Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)
Alright so to the review
Writing quality
Now, i really love how author wrote his story, a few grammar mistakes here and there (between he and she) but you can understand nonethless if you pay attention, but still 5 stars for the way he wrote it
Story development
Now in the first chapters till the story starts up, it s well, quite average, but after that i had no words, like i know i sound biased but this is my honest opinion, for the 73 chapters that i read at the end i had no words, it s so good, well beside in the middle of the "earth" part, that was a bit boring to me, but still 5 stars as i loved it
Character design
Now, i love the main character, the character development of him is done so so good that u don t realise till u read chapter 73,or maybe u do but you don t pay attention, just when u read chapter 73 and be like wow wtf, like srsly
I also like his big sister and friends, although not much character development over there, maybe his big sis, but it cannot compare to the main character, at all, at least my opinion, but i didn t read a story that made me like it so much so imma still give it 5 stars
Update stability
I can t comment on this, because i didn t finish the story as i read only the free chapters, but like, this is a biased vote here, but u can just ignore as it can be as wrong as it can be right, so 5 stars, only because i really love the story overall,
World background
Now i was really immersed in the story that i didn t really pay that much attention to actually write a review about it like, i know where the story happens, where they are everytime, but i can t write a detail review about it, but yeah as above, i still give 5 stars, honestly the background was enough for me, i understood everything that was going on.
I know the review is quite biased as i really loved it, but i know now that not everyone will that s for certain, so if someone reads my review, take that in mind too, always don t have high expectations as u would really enjoy it more, i mean i avoided this novel when i first saw it just because i thought it s some normal cultivation cliche and look at me now
This story is very close to my heart, as it is actually the first ever book that Webnovel took a liking to enough to have it contracted. I was a literal newbie in writing when I wrote this story, but I hope you like it as much as I loved writing it. Thank you!