Reincarnated as a doll [Revised]

I really hope this isn't another generic novel..... Sigh can't we get some more unique stuff? It could be a good one if the main character's life story is a tragedy and he actually develops into a good character but whatever...

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From what I've read so far it's really good the only issue is the spelling and grammar. You have a good plot line and basic characters you will need to develop them more and double check for grammar

If you love MC with Treasures and with loyal subordinates and kingdom building the this novel is for you.I like the mood of the story and it's progress is not fast nor slow just smooth and fine.The way the situation portrayed is great even the dynamic actions are detailed that you will imagine the scene to your head.Overall this is one of my favorite type of novel,great work author. Looking forward for the upcoming chapters.^_^

Decently interesting plot, that, if more chapters we're added I might like it, but not really my type of book

I caught her looking at me from the side.

"You see here the reminders and offerings left by my people, for those who had ventured within and did not return. It is a path that is fraught with danger. Small dangers, no doubt, compared to what you had just gone through, but danger all the same. You have just fought the Abyssal creatures so I shall not insult your bravery. All I ask is, are you certain that you wish to step onto this path? What you learn cannot be unlearned. And that is not what some are prepared to accept. You will never look at the world in the same way again."

""Yes sir!""