Reborn to become a heavenly serpent.

overall i really like this book, the world building and story progression is good, and it is one of the few web novels with systems that are actually good, the system isn't bratty or smug and does its job when it needs to. The protagonist too is good, he feels like a person that can actually exist and have overall good personality. So in conclusion give this story a try, its some of the few good ones in this site (i am writing this review to motivate the author as i am genuinely hooked up to the story and don't want this to be dropped) (sry for my english, its not my first language)

Hoping that the author could see this. Im truly amazed on how the author used certain rare words here and I enjoyed the story line a bit. Though the chapters are quite not up to date for the most part but I believe if this book were to be given enough time accumulating chapters after chapters, it will surely attain the recognition it deserves. I hope the author wont forget about the system in the near future chapters.

Friendly notice: English is not my first/main language and as such I'm not that great at it. If dear readers notice any grammatical errors or dear readers have an interesting suggestion. Please do let me know.

To me, it's interesting to read this story not because the storyline only, it also have it's own evolution, and the writing is unique. For example, the MC asking the system to list down his ability. I hope he'll make some improvement, especially his grammar. That's all from me.

overall i cant really say much since this book barely have less than 10 chapters. But the style of how the author explaining the situation is great.

nicely done. I really like novels where the mc is not a human.
The way the author wrote this book is very amazing!. Im hoping for more chapters!!

loving the work.

First time reading this type of book. A very refreshing start although it was a bit too fast. Love how the mc interact with the system and the fighting scene was well made.