Reborn in the Academy: A Third-Rated Villain's Survival Life

     I heard some noise. Hmm.... I recognize that sound. It is the sound of alarm, the siren which  is played at the time of the attacks. The island is being evacuated . Everyone are trying to save their lives without recognizing the truth that death is far better than this hell.     It is a chaos .

Perhaps because of being hit by a intestinal ejaculation while in the middle of an incontinent orgasm, Miyako seems to cum from a depth she has never experienced before

...the allure too great to endure

The Angel pointed his hands up, "Can I keep my job?"

While the character interactions are well-developed, the pacing of the story could be more balanced, as some scenes feel slower than necessary. Additionally, expanding on world-building details could enhance immersion. Strengthening the main plot’s direction will also help keep readers more invested in long-term developments.

The story seems very interesting with lots of potential, but I'm very sorry to say this, but the writing quality is not that great.... 🥺 Some paragraphs are broken on wrong places, being cut in half in the middle of a dialogue. And some parts are written like you are writing a script instead of a story + the way you write the actions around the dialogue is unnatural and off putting.Don't take my feedback to the heart, I'm just saying this because I wish for you to improve so I can enjoy the story. Please continue to write 🙏