Quality light novel ruined by a poor translator. The person seems to directly translate: conjunctions and punctuation included. This results in many awkward sentences with commas that make them grammatically incorrect.
I like your character's ruthless and detached personality. My only real criticism is that there aren't many chapters. Please write more and don't drop this story
I dont even know where to begin. It starts fairly well. Even with all the cliches it was still good and palatable. But as time went on, the MC became more and more unbearable. He starts out a cunning smart guy, but by chapter 80 he is an idiot and constantly scared of everything. It is disappointing to see him become that way for the sake of comedy. At least, I hope it was comedy, because if it wasnt then it was straight up atrocious.
I believe that even though it started as somewhat "generic" this novel has the potential to go to great heights. So far I'm enjoying it, and hoping to see more. Good luck on your journey
As the synopsis says it is a gaming cheat story & mc uses his past experiences and present cheat power to become op. There has been indication that the game is related to reality, so at some point may be there will superpower arc & some competition among countries in real world. So it was a ok read until the translation started going downhill. It is so bad & look like they directly machine traslated Chinese chapters (as even author's thanking note to his readers on that site got traslated) . So it becomes a complete headache inducing meh story.
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