Reborn As The Villainess's Knight

Started reading the novel because the author kindly helped me for my own, and man... The introduction was already something I rarely saw, if not never, and the passing is just getting better and better. Plus, I'm not really a fan of the novel written in first person, except for some exceptions, and this one's definitely one of them.
Great work ! Obviously recommend it and hope it'll get even more famous in the future

Shameless review time. So, my book's awesome. And I'll tell you why. My writing quality is pretty good, errors are pretty hard to come by and my vocab is fairly varied. And overall, my sentences flow naturally and words are used in ways that suit their connotations. My use of punctuation is good but I don't tend to use colons or semi colons, not that I think anyone actually cares though lolStory development isn't something I'll talk too in depth about, but, my pacing is on the slightly faster end sometimes but that's about it.Character design, so I think the way I've made character's different to what most would do, but I don't wanna spoil so shoo and read the novel. But, in terms of characterisation, it's pretty good except I'm not sure if I want to tie philosophical themes into characters yet since that takes brain power and knowledge (was planning on making a hedonistic or egoistic character but I need to think a lil bit for that)Update stability, so, I post daily atm but I can and will take rests when I need them, so I don't burn out.World background. So, I think I'm really good at this, a lot of authors just vomit info all over you. But, I prefer to only bring up info when it's relevant, since it's easier to remember and digest that way and leaves a little bit of thinking for you to do.

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Good story. Terrible fight scene writing. subpar overall writing. characters and world can use more depth, the power level of the empire or kingdom can be a starter. Shed some light onto his goals cause your Mc just reacted passively through the 14 chapters I read through. please develop the power scaling better, what tier was the monster he first faced, what can kill him blablabla. Think for a while then continue. Better yet just take some time polishing what you've already written. if you're first language isn't English then have a friend edit for you. Good luck.

I think it's great novel just missing a better description of the characters from mc original worlds information I'm just perfectionist 😋

It has potential to be something great but currently it lacks depth. The interpersonal relationships are a bit shallow, the title is "Reborn as the villainess's knight" there has been no significant development with her or what his earlier relationship was with her either. I feel like the academy arc should've been delayed a bit and his recovery and what happened to him after he was rescued should've been expanded a bit more cause tbh at this point I don't feel much connection to anybody in the story. The MC needs some personality, aspirations, flaws for us to care about him. The world building has had a lot of thought put into it and the character designs/powers are nice. This is all just my opinion tho and I hope this turns into something great.

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