this is actually amazing if not perfect, but the only thing im wondering is though if they would surivive long enough to create supersonic jets/other modern technology
This is the type of novel that I never knew I wanted, but once I read it, I fell in love with it. It's cute, adorable, simply fluff and sugar overload. Though, at the same it, it has a good consistent story, with good character planning, in which they feel like 3D characters, instead of some randoms. The jokes in this story are well though out, they are not exactly repetitive and they bring out the personality of the various characters in the novel. I dunno, I just love the story. I recommend giving it a try simply to experience what a well though out sugar overload feels like.
Bad grammar. hurts my eyes when there are no punctuations.Stupid MC, Naive, gullible, idiotic, not intelligent, low EQ.terrible at describing things, No plot, bad plot for the sake of story progression, Low level NPC, English names in an indian kingdom, only the MC has indian name.The system is glitching, has many errors, inferior system, Experience is wrong, shows less stat points
Have you ever met a person who makes you feel stupider while just listening to them? The main character of this novel is even worse than that, and you just feel stupider reading about him. It's so bad that when something happens in the book, you can think about stupidest thing you could ever think about doing in that situation, and the MC will do something stupider then that.
The narration was exceptional. The perks of being a native speaker. Although not all native speakers are well verse in grammar so I appreciate the author's supremacy among others. The story was interesting for me so this novel will surely garner attention in the near future. I am not much of a critique and I say this is outstanding for me. Kudos!
Inspired byHyde ParkinLondon, the park, which is dotted with palms,acaciatrees, and tropical foliage, is considered as one of the few "green" areas in Makati.
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