Reborn As A Doomsday Villainess

i just cant get past the bad grammer, words missing in sentences it completely takes you out of your immersion and you have to reread to know what the author wanted to say. Please get a editor to fix stuff like this

The biggest issue with this webnovel is the obvious product placement for Ancestry.com.  Every chapter includes the protagonist saying "I got my DNA tested for only $59 using the promo code SquareApron, and my AncestryDNA® results show that my ancestors lived in Hell, so I Am A Demon Descendant!"

Good system novel , writer has given a clear story line, Characters a relatable I enjoyed the book. looking forward to reading more in future.

The trio were excited to hear that he had a master. Con was the first to ask what they others were thinking.

Naruto folded his arms and started grumbling.

- "It's ok it's ok... it's me... it's me..."- said Finn receiving the punches thinking that at least he could share part of the pain she was feeling right now. After some time, she finally saw the face of the person holding her and her eyes started to tear up.

While the Elf commander was enjoying his fantasy, Fear was standing outside a castle door.

"I'll teach you how to kill them."