Decent story that suffers from bad Grammer pretty badly at some points. MC is pretty realistic with only the occasional habit of saving the damsel in distress. Overall, it's a good story that could use an editor but otherwise is interesting and we'll paced.
Great story so far! Sorry for the 2 β in updates. It's really interesting. Keep up the work! The breast are cheat codes lol. I love the story so far!!
So far this is really good!!! Heres to hoping that it continues ave doesn't fall off. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I just can't enough of your writing it's really good, this book it's interesting, it's about magic, I wonder if this about witches, I need to know what happens next, couldn't get enough.
I like it very much Don't you dare drop itMoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Wuying could say nothing to that. He had never thought of the Taint like that. And he had certainly never felt the Shadows affecting him either. How could he accept something like that, that he could not see, hear or touch? A sigh broke from his lips then. Did it really matter? He had already come this far. He would face this, as he had faced everything else that had been thrown at him!
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