Rebirth: Over the Horizon

This story is alright.  First thing you notice is writing quality, which is poor.  It sounds like a non-native speaker wrote it.  

I can't really comment on update stability, so I gave it 5 stars.  

Story development is pretty basic, and I was hoping to feel...more.  It's somewhat superficial and honestly required some deeper thought.  MC's just running around completing tasks right now without thinking much.  Honestly feeling a little bored.

Character is pretty basic. Props to actively choosing not to have a Harem.

World background is a little disappointing at this point in the story.  There's random GM interference to make the journey harder for the MC.  It seems highly unnecessary.  Also, he decided to add Gods and God's apostles early and make the MC into one, which seems a bit much.  

I don't know. Honestly just expect more, since the story has a lot of potential.

The story proluge is good but please fix the skill usage like mp cool down and it takes to much time for the development to takes place make the story more details

The writing quality is abysmal to the point where I have read machine translations that made more sense. The story seems to be all over the place and characters are quite bland the author desperately needs someone to edit past chapters.

Grammer is bad and story is all over the place and adding to that there is a huge lack of information the mc is strong because he is strong how he got there dosent seem to say

the story is common in a lot of Chinese novel, go back in time-> use knowledge to make big money and an head start+ op grow gear (maybe).
an big bad event is gonna happened and need to get ready for that and that's about it. this is a fine story but an big problem that some story have and a lot of people don't like this. and that is by making other people(side character) weak to make the main character strong,
For Example: MC spent hours trying to mastery the spear, but somehow he still got first boss kill and first dungeon,
even in todays gaming world, people that rush or try rushing past the mobs/group of people at the start of an new game is very common, and they are hardcore players. so the facts that MC still get first kill bonus. is pushing the plot a bit too much. like the first boss kill can happened in like the first 10 hours of the game. base on how long MC took to level.

The story is Kind of meh. Grammar and Vocabulary need work.

The Characters are kind of stagnant, not sure about this part, sometimes the story is good.

good novel, but is it to hard to just check for grammar mistakes, i mean theres not a lot, but from you writing i can tell that it is sloppy mistakes, so please proof read it so that the story flows better. keep up the work :D