The MC is very stupid and all the side characters are almost as useless as him. I just feel sorry for the people who paid coins to read this trash. All in all, I wouldn't recommend this to anyone.
👍🏻😺 It is a thrilling ongoing fantasy adventure that a quest through a vividly crafted world. Packed with action, fantasy, and evolving characters, the story keeps readers hooked with each new chapter. It's perfect for fans of epic quests and fantastical adventures eager to see what happens next!😍✨🌟
I am writing this after reading up to chapter 16.The story is interesting and has some new concepts. The plot progression is slow but only up to the point when the author is explaining about the System and the status window. I have read many System novels but only a small number of them actually details about the Status Screens. This novel is one of them!Then there is the world building. Honestly, the number of chapters is still less to tell exactly how good the world building is but from they way the author described the village, I can tell they would do a good job in this field.There are many good things about the novel like daily updates, good writing quality and a nice description of everything. But let's also talk about some drawbacks. One could say that the story is moving very slowly but I am a LOTM reader so I like the pace. The one thing you should work on is to give some ups and downs to the story to make it more interesting.Although I say that, keep doing what you're doing as I can see it improving as the new chapters come in. I like the novel and will continue reading it👍. I hope it keeps on getting better and better...
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