Oooooooo, I was actually hooked, what an organic progression, loved it. 10/10. Definitely would read again some day. Nice job author keep it up please!😉😉😉
I really had to force myself to read the first ten chapters to give the story a chance.Like with The Strongest Gene, the “science” in this novel makes me feel like I’m bashing my head into a wall. One hundred percent does not equal 100% in this series. If you don’t understand a lick of science, then make the series pure fantasy! Amino acids and the function of turning genes on and off aren’t mentioned. Why aren’t viruses used for genetic modification? Did people from the future forget how to splice genes? Furthermore, if you’re in a clan, then isn’t there a good chance that you are related and share the same genes? Why are there “formulas” and “equations” for genes? I would have thought the translators chose the wrong term and wrote “gene” instead of whatever was meant, but DNA is specifically mentioned in the second chapter. The author’s ideas on evolution are… interesting, even if they don’t make a lick of sense. Pluto returned to being a planet. The complications of pioneering through space and colonizing various habitats with different gravities is completely left out. Also, the author seems to have forgotten about the planets in other galaxies and that everything in space is constantly moving and isn’t going to stay in one place.….Why are math and the sciences classified as “literature” in this school? Just wtf…If something is going to be sci-fi, then actually make it sci-fi! There is no science to go along with all this fiction! This is a standard, painfully cliché transmigration story where the person from the past takes over the body of a loser in the future. As usually, the MC starts out quite weak and looked down upon by his clan, but he undergoes magical stat-boosting... There is nothing original here. At all.The story starts off with an information dump so heavy, I almost dropped the series in the first few chapters. This is definitely a series that “tells” the story rather than “shows” it. Impressively boring. Without establishing the character or giving the readers any interest in the plot, the MC just cultivates. That’s right—this may actually be a cultivation novel disguised as a science-fiction.As for characterization, there isn’t any. I guess the MC’s trait is that he’s hard-working? He was from our era, but nothing is revealed about his past life.There is no story or character design, and the background doesn't make a lick of sense. I feel bad for the translation team for having to read this. Not recommended.
I wasn't aware that this is the author of Martial God Space. Pity, I hadn't seen new chapters in a while so I don't know if any more came out. This story is a disappointment in comparison. Run of the mill.The only time I was genuinely amused and enjoyed it was when the MC's parents had some playful banter and when the Lil fatty gave the mc advice on getting chicks.(This here will be my new signature,A bunch of authors seem to like to delete my reviews. I understand that I don't say much that is positive, but I am the most open minded reviewer you will have and there will be readers who are looking for my review other than the other Sh*t posts saying :"👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍""Exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp Exp exp""🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"and other similar minded gibberish.)
Not really a shame the author dropped this novel considering the end was going to be quite disappointed anyway. Great while it lasted but the author clearly lost motivation way before ending the novel since the unfinished arc wasn't enjoyable to the slightest. The protagonist was great as he was, a selfish young man with mental illness but the author clearly had other plans for him which would surely just make him another protagonist just slightly more mature. Small amount of plot-armor here and there, the world building was average, the cultivation system is average aswell. What made this novel slightly unique is it's side characters which some of them have genuine personality but I always had the feeling their life revolved around protagonist despite the author saying they don't.
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Ok .. NGL. . the prologue alone got me hooked and even before I knew it, i read all 3 chaps .. It was so interesting, something I haven't read here in a while so I will definitely be looking forward to it!!
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