The story is good and all but, author should have put slow-paced tag unto the description tags. Great grammar and smooth flow of sentences. Nothing out of place or forced so far. Also, I almost forgot about the system, though it'll never come. This is my review, that's all.
A wonderful story with its own unique elements, we get to see a blend of two sides. The MC even though coming from a different world, takes care and puts effort into blending in with the new world that he finds himself in. Unlike many transmigration where the MC just goes on about caring for wherever he might have ended up in, this story aims to remain closer to a reality check by giving us a pov where the MC doesn't wander around, carefree.
The writing quality and update rate are well maintained as of now. The story progresses steadily and there is no lack of nice scenes to read. Overall a good and fun read, something with a different pace from a cultivation novel.
Other than quite a few spelling mistakes throughout the story chapters, the plot and characters are good. Definitely one of the better stories I have read, I certainly got engrossed in it fairly quickly. It doesn’t feel too slow at the begining and the Mc acts how you would expect, especially from being in a new environment with things he’s never seen before. And the Author does a great job of making you hate a character with a passion one moment, and the next have you actually start liking them. Definitely reccomend giving this a read, though I do feel it depends on the person whether you fully enjoy or mildly enjoy this story. Regardless, it’s written well, needing only some minor editing. Give a few chapters a read yourself and decide from there, at least 10 chapters would be my recommendation. Simply because opinions differ throught the first few chapters in every story and 10 feels the most optimal for deciding whether something is a go-to or no go. Happy reading!
As one of the early readers who read this story before it was published online, all I can say is this is an awesome story.
The interaction of King with his daughter, his reactions when he's suddenly in different world, all are more human like than most of the stories on this platform.
I am looking forward for more chapters. I just hope, the author, who's also as lazy as me, works hard for this story.
Story progress so slow and boring ........ Theres so much unecessary moment imo. But apreciate author posting it daily , 3,4/5......................................
Weirdly i absolutely love this novel to the deep of my heart..... And will probably always be my favorite novel. Idk if its because of how its written or because of the proggresion in the story. I fell in love with this slice-of life slow story like apart from a few people you can feel that most of them are real and fresh with different personalities
It's a transmigration novel but as I have read most of the transmigration novels, usually the plot line never changes where a normal person get into a new body of royal or rich person but here in this novel, this is the twist becoz ML here being a king in previous life get transmigrate to be a novice.(poor guy)
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The writing quality and update rate are well maintained as of now. The story progresses steadily and there is no lack of nice scenes to read. Overall a good and fun read, something with a different pace from a cultivation novel.
The interaction of King with his daughter, his reactions when he's suddenly in different world, all are more human like than most of the stories on this platform.
I am looking forward for more chapters. I just hope, the author, who's also as lazy as me, works hard for this story.