I think It was better before he entered the events of the Empress of the Moon and he saved her younger sister and thinks about hitting him. She prepared cheap comedy in anime.
I thought it'd seem an interesting novel from the first chapter but it ended up as another cliche trash novel. Read up to chapter 20 and half of my brain cells are gone. For someone who seemed to be on the top of the world in his past life, he goes full on retard the moment he reincarnates.
Writing Quality:3/5 Barely passable.
Stability of Updates:4/5 Good Enough.
Story Development:1/5 Too much inconsistency that I can't even say anything about it just that read the comments on some chapters and you will see the amount of stupidity in this story goes.
Character Design:1/5 Does this guy have a split personality? or just retarded? He will act like a kid to that slightly offended him the Xia but when it comes to Jasmine who tries to murder him he will just lick her shoes off like a retard, I mean just a few seconds ago she tried to murder him only for him to tell all about his secrets I mean who the f*ck does that..
World Background:2/5 meh.
I shamelessly give you 5 stars because i love all fanfic novel ATG and not only that but i think your writing quality was good enough. I hope you don't rushed this novel...
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Stability of Updates:4/5 Good Enough.
Story Development:1/5 Too much inconsistency that I can't even say anything about it just that read the comments on some chapters and you will see the amount of stupidity in this story goes.
Character Design:1/5 Does this guy have a split personality? or just retarded? He will act like a kid to that slightly offended him the Xia but when it comes to Jasmine who tries to murder him he will just lick her shoes off like a retard, I mean just a few seconds ago she tried to murder him only for him to tell all about his secrets I mean who the f*ck does that..
World Background:2/5 meh.