Rebirth in 1981: Hunting and Fishing in the Northwest

"You want us to rescue this critic" Edna said

"Tarnak come." he said and the dragon lifted its head and nodded. As soryn reached his hand out the dragon moved its way up his arm much like a ferret and curled nicely behind his head. He nodded and spun on his heels.

Great book, would really recommend it. Just wish it had more updating days.

I am up to date on the story. I can say that it is a good story. A good job has been done. The characters, the development, the world are all good enough. I can't say that I experienced any boredom while reading it. You certainly did a good job.  As for the suggestion part, I think it is not right to constantly assign an adjective to predicates. For example, "I'm leaving." his voice was harsh. It is normal to use this at the beginning, but as the story progresses and we get to know the character, the reader should be able to understand such things. Of course, you are the author, the decision is yours. Finally, I wonder how long the story will be, it seems like there are strange events that can be told.