I will be reviewing 3 sections; quality of the text, characters, and the setting only, as those were the ones that did not receive full stars.The quality of the writing is well thought out and written well, and I didn't encounter any grammatical mistakes. It reads well and fluidly.The story so far a bit confusing, and I'm not exactly sure what it will lead up to, so maybe add foreshadowing here, and there in a few chapters -- would be nice.For the final section, the setting needs to be more detailed and explained. The character's emotions and actions are explained pretty well, but the environment and setting description could use more polish. We have a general idea where the characters could be, but it's not explicitly clear to what place a character could be at during some important event, like the battles or the walking down the river, what are the surroundings? It would be a nice touch to add the full surroundings of where the characters are to build the world better.Overall, it is a good read, I like the idea of the taming!
Tapi hanya itu. Setelah Anda memutuskan apa yang Anda inginkan, apa yang dipikirkan oleh seluruh dunia tidak menjadi masalah bagi Anda lagi. Dan saya hanya ingin anak saya, sehat dan bahagia dalam pelukan saya. Saya tahu, situasi saya tidak ideal. Itu salah dengan semua langkah sosial, pukulan besar bagi sistem perkawinan suci yang diciptakan oleh budaya kita. Tapi itu tidak berarti kita salah. Semua yang terjadi adalah kesalahan. Dan kesalahan bisa terjadi. Kita harus menerima kesalahan seperti itu dan terus maju. Dan kami melakukannya. Sama seperti kata-kata seseorang tidak bisa membuat Anda layak, dengan cara yang sama mereka tidak bisa menghilangkan nilai Anda. Setelah semua itu hanya kata-kata, mereka tidak bisa menyakiti Anda sampai Anda membiarkannya.
That's really sad, I'm guessing that guy is a jerk and wanted to leave her because he wanted someone else. Those type of guys don't deserve the girls heart, think about it, if you gave out you're love to someone and in the end, they just throw it away like some useless trash. What would be you're reaction?. The same one the girl had,so she made the right choice by dumping that dude...
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