My question is, what’s the conflict? I like the Violet part, but I really don’t understand why Kat’s keeping the fact that she knows her late husband’s Aiden’s donor. I understand why he’s keeping it a secret. Kat passed out when she found out so you’d think she’d attack Aiden about it already.
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