This is unoriginal like the whole concept if you want an actually good story with pretty much the same system go read Divine Hack System by NunuXD it actually has good grammar and a combat system that actually makes sense
so, we got a very detailed five star review here, but unfortunately, it seems that webnovel deleted it...i dont know why tho...anyway, very fine details...except for the part where he mentions spirit stones scattered everywhere.cough cough (spoiler: mc needs an actual map to download, and unless the location/info is written, he will not know anything. the map feature of the system is only a digital print of a map)
During the first 40 chapters I was very frustrated reading this novel because it was almost the exact carbon copy of Desolate era. I like desolate era but I did not want to read something exact similar to it. But I managed to endure and believe me I was glad that I did not drop this novel because it was fricking great. I all recommend all of you to stick to it until the end.Dear author you did a great job there but I think you should change your writing style a bit since you write a lot of chapters about some things which were not necessary like you spend 5 chapter just explaining the abilities of eye of myriad dao which could have been done in just about 2.5 chapters. So what I want to say is that you focus a lot on unnessary chapters. Anyway keep up the good work.
This novel has very quickly grown to be one of my most anticipated each day. The MC has a different personality than the usual, and is fun to see how she handles things that occur around her. She has quite a rough background to her, and suffers a loss that I honestly didn't expect to see very early on. Even the likely love interest has things rough in her own way. Seeing low points like this feels good in a story from time to time, since life doesn't just magically work out from start to finish for folks most of the time without some amount of bumps or potholes in the road.First review I've posted so I'm sure it isn't great, but overall I enjoy the heck out of this story, and I'm excited to see where it goes from here.
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its a very good book if you are into stories that evolve around history and facts. hint of past present and foreshadowing is amazing the future chapters have a lot of potential
A great story that scratches the apocalyptic itch with a great side of romance. The MC is F/M, but there is also a strong presence of yuri with there being 2 yuri couples and 2 f/m couples. I didn't think having most of the characters we follow in a relationship would be so good, I mean after thinking about it, it made sense. They only have each other so may as well enjoy it. It definitely doesn't feel like we are following one person's story, but it's the entire cast's story. We get the great highs of battle and then we get the slow interludes which also serve as ways for them to discover themselves as well as further their relationships. It feels like I am there with the squad experiencing the terrors of the world and laughing with them whenever they have a moment of rest.Overall give it a read, It has a bit of everything, so if you enjoy Yuri there is plenty of it and if you like F/M there is also something there for you. Love action there is plenty of arc of intense battles as well as mysteries being uncovered.
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