We need more readers! This novel is the definition of decent and fine writing techniques and skills. Great grammars and not much writing mistakes which is good since many readers are picky about it. The first three chapters goes with the flow like a river and it doesn't start off real rough like other novels. The only problem I may find is the updates but I understand that the writer has their busy schedules and has other first priorities in reality outside of being an author so updates aren't a rush and I appreciate your great effort. Saved to my library! ✔✔
Good story. Good characters. Good plot. Little problems with the grammar here and there but that’s not too big of a problem. Wish there was more constant updates though.
Unlike other cliché VRMMORPG the premise of this novel is totally different. From the MC's family circumstances to his chosen class everything is fresh and new. This is my first detailed review on any novel and I have only read up to chapter 12, I will try to update my review as the novel updates as well.Writing Quality: The writing quality is very good in my opinion. But English is my 3rd language so I don't really know much about any grammatical error but in my opinion it's one of the well written web novel and since I can understand everything clearly, it's a 5-star from me.Stability of Updates: Can't really say much about it, but I believe the update stability should be fairly good. So 4-star.Story Development: Although the author chose a repeated premise for the novel, it is written in a fairly unique way. There is not many cliche tropes (at least until now) and with the way the story is proceeding, I believe the novel has some huge potential.Character Design: Can't say much about this one, as not many characters have been introduced in the story, but I believe the author can do a good work on this as well. So, 4-star for now.World Background: Can't say much about this as well but again I believe author can do a fairy good job on this one as well. So 4-star for this for now.This review is for up to chapter 12 only but although a repeated genre based on the story's progression I am really excited for upcoming chapters. And if you are reading this review then I believe this novel deserves at least a chance. This is really a great book.
Shizuku interrupt Arata before he's done talking. Shizuku turned her body and faces Arata, looking at her face someone behind Arata feel relieved because of Shizuku face's filled with determination and strength.
Ultear had begun to open his eyes after a few hours. After looking at the ceiling for a few seconds he got up and began to observe the room. Although it had been a long time, Ultear could recognize that this was his old room. When he tried to remember what had happened suddenly he hears how someone enters the house.
Now, I must once again mention that I am a contemplator. I like to think about things, however, one thing I expressly have never tried to think about is the end of my favorite books, because I can't. I'm a very logical person, but extremely unimaginative because of that.
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