it was great and understandable. There are some paragraphs that needs proofreading. And the dialogues needs improvement. Nonetheless, it doesn't affect the novel as a whole.
Story Development:
I like how the story is progressing. It gives off a mystery and cliffhanger vibes. Makes you wanna read it more. Interesting, if I conclude it.
Character Design:
The characters in this novel are very unique and makes you have certain emotions when reading. Even the side characters have a fun traits.
Updating Stability:
Consistent. The author always goes to his promise; every x powerstone = x chapters. And he updates it every day. So, you can certainly quench your thirst if you got cliffhanged.
World Background:
For me the world background seems quite small and after seeing the concept art of the world I'm certain it is. It would've been nice if the world is 20x the size of the sun or has multiple worlds aside the current world the MC is in.
one of the best book on this platform by far
the world building is top notch along with just rt pace for the story
all characters are unique and charecter development is excellent exept rt at the start where ryu charecter takes a sudden shift but it's not that problematic
the side side charecter also hv their own life stories and u can feel they hv been built up with care and a lot of thinking
the suspence in the story is quite good and the author is very profound in touching the rt emotion at the rt time
am so glad I came across this bk ;)
am still having some confusion about the mate bond stuff but ig it'll get explained later on
the only dissapointment is the update stability I hv finished reading all the chs for almost 3 weeks but still no new chs
author if u hv dropped the bk plz let me know tho its such a shame for such an awesome bk
I'm just going to clarify that the mate in here is an important plot point but the story doesnt revolve around it.
this is about word buildings. lores. epic adventure. action with game elements sprinkled with slow romance. weak to strong mc and character development
this is a long story with tons of charcaters and subplots. chapter 80 is hardly 1/8 of the story. do take it in mind when reading. a lot could still happen [img=recommend]
if you like the story please add to library. votes, comments, reviews and gifts r always appreciated. [img=update]
Okay so I read 23 chapters, and a few reviews. And being a slave.. no thanks, you can say 'will be a turning point' and bs like this. Okay read it for 300 chapters and it would maybe be good, but I won't torture myself for what, 200 chapters?
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This is geared towards ML and the plot fullows Ryu, a halfbeast, and his missions that will tackle his birth and the many mysteries of the world of Septverden!
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Enjoyable read however, people may get turned off from the beginning. MC has problems with his slavery and mate pairing to an unlikeable character(not main FMC). This is only prominent within the first volume and even after 20 chapters from the start, it lessens a considerable amount and was quite tolerable. The mate idea so far is a subplot to many different characters and doesn't entirely effect MC's decision making. It is well worth it to push onto Vol 2 and 3.
*For people who don't like her, she hasn't been the main focus nor frequently appearing in vol 2 and 3.*
The story itself is well written and fight scenes are good. There is a lot of gore and dark elements in the story. World building is slowly built and explained through conversations. There's not much info dumping if any. Some POV changes but not much for people who don't like them still good providing other characters thoughts.
Characters are good, some are unlikeable, and unredeemable while you have there counterparts. Variety of different characters and people actually die for their own choices and actions. There are consequences even for the MC. The MC himself is naïve and curious about the world considering his whole life has been in a coliseum. He makes mistakes and learns from them. A story of his journey and self discovery would definitely recommend, well deserved rating.
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it was great and understandable. There are some paragraphs that needs proofreading. And the dialogues needs improvement. Nonetheless, it doesn't affect the novel as a whole.
Story Development:
I like how the story is progressing. It gives off a mystery and cliffhanger vibes. Makes you wanna read it more. Interesting, if I conclude it.
Character Design:
The characters in this novel are very unique and makes you have certain emotions when reading. Even the side characters have a fun traits.
Updating Stability:
Consistent. The author always goes to his promise; every x powerstone = x chapters. And he updates it every day. So, you can certainly quench your thirst if you got cliffhanged.
World Background:
For me the world background seems quite small and after seeing the concept art of the world I'm certain it is. It would've been nice if the world is 20x the size of the sun or has multiple worlds aside the current world the MC is in.
the world building is top notch along with just rt pace for the story
all characters are unique and charecter development is excellent exept rt at the start where ryu charecter takes a sudden shift but it's not that problematic
the side side charecter also hv their own life stories and u can feel they hv been built up with care and a lot of thinking
the suspence in the story is quite good and the author is very profound in touching the rt emotion at the rt time
am so glad I came across this bk ;)
am still having some confusion about the mate bond stuff but ig it'll get explained later on
the only dissapointment is the update stability I hv finished reading all the chs for almost 3 weeks but still no new chs
author if u hv dropped the bk plz let me know tho its such a shame for such an awesome bk
I'm just going to clarify that the mate in here is an important plot point but the story doesnt revolve around it.
this is about word buildings. lores. epic adventure. action with game elements sprinkled with slow romance. weak to strong mc and character development
this is a long story with tons of charcaters and subplots. chapter 80 is hardly 1/8 of the story. do take it in mind when reading. a lot could still happen [img=recommend]
if you like the story please add to library. votes, comments, reviews and gifts r always appreciated. [img=update]
happy reading [img=recommend]
The master can basically kill her servant with a thought.
I'm not reading this
Please support my new work for Spirity2021!
(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
This is geared towards ML and the plot fullows Ryu, a halfbeast, and his missions that will tackle his birth and the many mysteries of the world of Septverden!
(づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ
Leave reviews and add to your library if you like the story.
٩(๑•◡-๑)۶ⒽⓤⒼ❤
*For people who don't like her, she hasn't been the main focus nor frequently appearing in vol 2 and 3.*
The story itself is well written and fight scenes are good. There is a lot of gore and dark elements in the story. World building is slowly built and explained through conversations. There's not much info dumping if any. Some POV changes but not much for people who don't like them still good providing other characters thoughts.
Characters are good, some are unlikeable, and unredeemable while you have there counterparts. Variety of different characters and people actually die for their own choices and actions. There are consequences even for the MC. The MC himself is naïve and curious about the world considering his whole life has been in a coliseum. He makes mistakes and learns from them. A story of his journey and self discovery would definitely recommend, well deserved rating.