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I really like your story! I also liked how you outlined it. It’s very creative! Keep working and updating because I am here for you! Good job author!

Here is a review by the master => After reading this i think you need to improve your grammer and also vocabulary. There is still room for improvement as i see that you are new to this so you can improve a lot. Good luck.

You really have a wide spectrum of imagination. To make up different scenarios of differing settings is truly a creative feat. It is amusing that the POV is like the narration of the readers, letting us be more intimate with the story.


As always, grammatical errors are something that we have to take into account when writing. They can be easily corrected and will able you to have a better progression in your passages.


Each scenarios can be a story on their own, that is provided. However, I do feel, as opposed to the other review, that the pacing is quite hurried? I don't really know how to word it, but yes, it feels like that. Also, in between dialogues, please put in a little bit of transition, so it wouldn't be as lengthy as it is now. Let the information flow out through the whole chapter instead of clumping them in one paragraph.


All in all, this is a great test for imaginative people. It is exciting to read different worlds in each chapter! You are a great writer, so please continue writing! I'm gonna be cheering you on!

Brother Sandeep have step upon his own daoist path. a path unique to himself and unknown to many readers!

Invasion of enemie, weapon of destruction and a unique style of writing
A must read

P.S(install grammar KY to automatically correct minor grammar mistake)
Good luck

So here’s my review after reading eight chapters. Let’s start with the technicalities: in terms of grammar - there’s little to no errors; pacing - just right. The way of writing is new to me, especially the part where the author narrates as if I am the one in the book — that is an interesting way to write. However I’m still not used to the manuscript type of writing. But that may be preference as well.

On the other hand, concept is intriguing, as well as plot. Well-researched also. Characters have depth. Nothing much I could really critique. Keep on writing.

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?