A refreshing genre for qidian novel, this novel revolved around Jack, an abused kid going for lifetime adventure, meeting foster parents, played awesome baseball, when I say adventure its nothing to do with sword or dragon literally, however compare than facing this types of challenge, Jack story is kind of heartwarming, sad, happy, bewilderedly, and all types of emotion flavours, I kind of love it. I give five star just for Jack braveness and wimpyness.. Guys read it, it will not waste your time.
I have read the MLT version of this story and it was just extremely generic. The guy stays in the library, saves the clan, teaches two little girls secretly(I don't know what his obsession with teaching little girls is) but ya overall it was meh. It's like a copy and paste of all the other sign-in novels.
I never actually read this book im just trying to get exp so yeah. Did you know that flags take up multiple characters? ππππππππ.
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The progression is super monotonous and distasteful. Everything goes according to the mc. There is no tension, no conflict , no arguments, no learning path. no challenges. Even if the MC is a reincarnation of an old guy with vast experience, you can make his speech, his thoughts clash with modern day rules and trends. His walk could have been made criticized. If everything goes right it stops being believable. Always try to retain small blemishes in character. It will bring more depth to character. Side characters come and go and everyone has the same relationship with MC. All the side characters only say the things that are necessary for the story to proceed . Nothing more , nothing less. They don't have any personal gimmicks, habits, features that can separate one another. In my mind all of them may look the same, it will not matter.The plot progression is so summary like that everytime I read a chapter I want to stop then and there.
<You have finished the balancing stage, you can now choose a class, a sub class, a patron God, a Basic ability to cultivate and the place you will be teleported. >
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