Re: Write [Isekai /LitRPG]

chapter 23Interesting so far. Cool concept. I'm confused because of the tags because of its villain, killer and dark tag cause I still don't see it yet in current development(I'm happy). Maybe in future chapters. There's not much plot because it just started, but I think it's good so far.

Again here to tell u all to pick this book as I  Wait for my fav auth to update. yall, the only reason I hv given 4.8 and not 5 is because I'm waiting for the update that's all, apart from that. this is 🤌. give it a try n u won't stop. any book by this author,  there shouldn't be a second thought to read. I see by thatamazinggirl and I click l, simple. BTW, @thatamazinggirl. update ma'am!!!!!!

Just a small suggestion you are leaving chapters without finishing it the princess request second chapter ends before he tells his decision and the alchemy deal also ends before they discussed the deal. It seems like an incomplete ending.

The story line is good, The story having a good potential to have awsome plot… i really enjoyed reading this story and i am eagerly waiting for next chapter