It sucks that the author tend to overexplain everything. There's too much of "Tell don't show" in this story. No sense of mystery at all and the novel doesn't evoke my curiosity because author keeps explaining the personality and relationship of characters in the narration rather than showing it through actions.
I stand before you as the unrighteous author of this wonderful book, believe me when I say this you'll like this book if you're looking for an smart, rational, opportunistic, ruthless and neutral evil mc with no bottom lines. If you're here for the power of friendship and jade beauties, please take a u turn as this book strictly forbids such nonsense.This book is solely for those who walk the path of a demon and those who are tried of all beta Mc's out there, let my work bring some joy to your lives it's all I could ask for excluding power stones, reviews and comments.So what do you think?
not a bad story. but as usual with many stories on Webnovel the editing starts out good and then goes to the dump. first 110 chapters are good quality. Then it starts to degrade fast. missing punctuation, missing captilization for names, incorrect grammar, changing established names, etc. if the quality of the chapters editing had stayed the same I would rate it as 3/5. good to read to pass the time. I give it q star due to the usual drop of good quality to garbage editing.
It's crap not sure why rating is so high... well i guess since author can delete bad reviews helps. It jumps from on thing to another too quick, mc stutters like a retard for no reason, anyway read if you iq is low you might like it.
Till chapter 21 BEST literally BEST.Good writing quality and almost no mistake.This novel actually is focusing on kingdom building😁😁 and not just for tags (like some of the novels really hate them a lot).KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR👍👍👍. And hope you don't drop it.(A huge fan of kingdom building novel)
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