Raven Moon

"My lord, the young mistress and her friend have returned to the mansion."

"I can make one!" blurted out Magnler.

"What you do if he calls you again?"

We approached a large building no too far from the other one. "This is your house now" said Jerry "WAIT! I get a house to myself!" "Of course Lady Lucy." Said Jerry bowing as he walked away.

My teammates and coaching staff at Lisbon find me very talented and are always praising me. But still, this doesn't satisfy my tummy at all. I have this terrible hunger to win more. Be the best in this whole world. Beat them. Till no one is left. I repeat - NO ONE.

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"Im sorry kiddo, but he didn't make it. Your Daddy is gone. He's dead." I felt like million of knives stabbed my chest when I heard what the doctor says. I shout, cried loudly, and freaked out there, and the last thing I knew, I was being dragged by the nurses and they injected something on me.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

At the moment of this review, I read until chapter 100. my opinion is very simple: a interesting story butchered by a horrible machine translation. just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.

I would like if the author would give us pics of the characters plz

Here we Go Go Go...!!!...!!!...!!!...!!!

Nice first chapter and great potential, added to library