I don't understand how the MC who had to fight his step siblings and schemes against each other who choose to have a harem and let his own children have to experience the same thing.I just don't understand the chinese author logic.Chinese author also like to use family in-fighting as a way to get enemy for the MC but that feel stupid when we think about it.Having the family fighting each other only make them hate each other more, and especially when the elder fan the flame even more, and it only result in either outsider take over or the family have to cut off it own members, sometime the member even betray their family as well which feel stupid.For some reason, the family are expected to be united against outsider, while instead of cultivating feeling for the family, they oppress their family member, and expect them to still fight for the family. it feel stupid.
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock!Also, please study the art of spacing. It will improve your storytelling a lot!I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
The story is pretty awesome and interesting up till know...I like how the protagonist is "very" strong in the beginning and has comparing material to one of the top beings on the "planet". I also like how the story is different from the "real" Harry Potter and gives a complete knew view of things and aspects. It is easy to read and most importantly: fun to read. I read the original so the hopes are quite hight. The story was easy to follow, but if one didn't read Harry Potter, some points might be not so easy to understand or they have just forgotten. Therefore I suggest that you, take over the author way by adding explanations. My biggest hope and wish is that you would write the story to the end and keep it interesting.
Its a good story and worth the read. It's a bit of a change from the normal storylines we get. ........................................................................................
"I understand, but I need time to get used to all of this. I still can't wrap around this whole thing of me being a part of the Lee family. So I hope you would be kind enough and be patient with me."
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