I did not read this book but the synopsis says it all. You want to avoid talking in the past tense when writing a novel. Also avoid switching between them in the same sentence
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I quite like the beginning and the premise of it. A world in which VR exists and is used for more than just games, though it has entered that frontier too. A story is about a ranker from the first VRMMO game that intends to go to the next one because the first game has finished. It does not seem all that special, but it is a twist that is not really used and I like it. The main character is a normal guy that has friends and a younger brother that will follow him into the game. I like the character design a lot, and have no complaints about it. World background is also interesting although it is just beginning.
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An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Fight on author.
Keep up the great work, and I hope that you can see this story through the end. Cheers!
If you're interested, I could use some of your help too with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged).
I don't mind adding this my library and do a binge-reading.