I like the concept, but the writing has a lot of grammar errors and missing words, so you might want to get an editor or beta or edit it yourself. Also, I got a bit confused over whether there is a difference between the original and new world? But for a non-native speaker I'm pretty impressed! I like the fact that there's a good amount of action and encounters in each chapter. Overall, good effort! Hope to see more!
slow mc powerup + slow plot development + original fic w/o multiple daily updates = fic that will probably be dropped or delayed before getting finished. May as well read a translated novel - at least there are more chapters and faster update
Although its a little early to review a story but still wanted to do it because I found it a little bit interesting...Most of the people saying it wasn't there type of book at first but l found it pretty interesting and cool...The story development and world background is quite nice and decent...All the best author... Hope u will finish writing this awesome story...
Sonia let out a sigh while trying to walk even by dragging herself. Actually, she was glad that they could still go to the same school, though not as classmates.
"W-where are we?" Waking up fully after the intense head patting session by the senior sister, Sofie finally looked at the surroundings and found out she was up in the mountain with fire burning the ground they walked on. More like the fire lizards walked on.
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