Races: Online ( VR Smartphone App )

A good and progressive beginning, development of character is moving at a good pace, the switching of tenses here and there is a small flaw, otherwise storyline is good.

I stopped at chapter 3.
When I started chapter 1, I really liked and enjoyed it and thought this might be a good novel I will until the end.
Chapter 3 killed the story for me:
- The MC's avatar race is human(insanely boring) and having only the choice of being human, mad the title of the chapter such a scum
- The MC's choice of customisation(=basically no customisation at all) is already proving how boring the MC' character is that I have lost all desire of wanting to read anything further about him.
I can't understand why the author chose such customisation, because for me, the charm of game avatar customisation is that you can choose to customise the avatar however you want and BECOME whoever you want in that game. If it is the same as your real-life self, then why bother even playing the game instead of just living out your real-life?

So, not really a review (for good balance i put a 4/5) because i'm just near the 15th chapters.

Honestly the writing etc. is good but i lack passion for this one.
I think the "sims simulator pov and writing" is killing me (i know for the cliffhanger about that).
if it's like that all the time, I'd rather quit.
If a charitable soul can answer me that would be nice.

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Hello, this is your dear friend dropping you a five-star review to show support. I will read more closely and give a more accurate review and if you're reading this for that, please just skip this. I will say though, author writes quite well but needs to work hard on keeping up more stable updates. Please maintain stable updates. You can do it rach, I somewhatpartlyprobably believe in you!

Alright what to say what to say...Its great so far. The world is clearly described without going overboard and letting readers figure things out on their own. The mc is fun and can be relatable at times which is always a plus, the writing quality itself is great itself with the exception of a typo or two every now and then.

All in all this looks promising and its definitely worth a read, at least from what I've seen.

I love it!! I don't usually read this genre but I loved this. It makes me want to play games, lol

You've got quite a good book there Rachy. And I am happy you were among those who won the contest.

This book is awesome. I think this is the author's first gaming novel and she sure os doing a great job.

If you haven't read, then I do not know what u are waiting for... Come on and read, good work author.