Yes please, it would really great to have up to date high quality translations of this novel here. Divine Dao Library (DDL) has an amazing translation. (751 chapters currently)
One thing to note is that DDL leaves a few buffer links for upcoming chapters, which only have a template message on them. So, some extra checks might be needed before copying text over.
It... could have been better. The author has a talent for capturing interest with their writing style, and the translator is excellent, but some of the arcs end abruptly, leaving you feeling unsatisfied. Additionally, the main character is rather uncaring, which made it hard for me to connect with the plot and its characters.
The story is good, following a familiar pattern seen in many BL transmigration novels, particularly concerning the blackening of the main character or love interest. However, I found the ending to be quite rushed, almost too hasty.
*Spoiler*
It ends with a happy ending (HE).
There are plot holes in the story, which, while common in some narratives, could have been better addressed for clarity. If the ending had been more polished and the plot holes resolved, I would have given the story a solid 5. Despite these issues, it was still a good read, and I recommend it to anyone looking for a new BL novel.
It's not great, but I pushed through since it’s a short novel.
The first arc is decent, though it feels a bit weak—had it been more developed, it could have been fantastic.
I do love this type of main character (MC), and initially, I enjoyed his interactions with the system. However, these interactions became quite repetitive, just like the plot. A common pitfall of quick-transmigration (QT) novels is that each world can start to feel the same, which is exactly what happened here. It’s very much a rinse and repeat scenario.
I almost dropped the novel a couple of times because it's so illogical. While I can accept a certain level of fantasy, as it is fiction, the second and fourth arcs had me questioning the characters' intelligence. The authors seemed to be testing how far they could push the boundaries, and the actions of the characters were just too fantastical.
Additionally, I felt there wasn’t much chemistry between the MC and the male lead (ML). The ML is your typical obsessive, possessive yandere, but it’s hard to see how he became attracted to the MC, as little time is spent developing this aspect. The same goes for the MC; it’s difficult to understand how their feelings developed.
I don’t think I would recommend reading this novel unless you have a lot of free time and patience.
Respectfully, the plot and characters feel incredibly rushed, and their actions lack logic. I’m a big fan of over-the-top cliché plots for the sake of entertainment, but this just doesn’t cut it. The plot and character development are too sparse, leaving their actions feeling unsubstantiated. If this were a pure PWP or straight smut, I could overlook the issues—but it’s not. The story isn’t explicit or smutty enough to compensate for the illogical plot.
The author tries to portray the main character as a dramatic actor or sex enthusiast who enjoys forceful play, but the "play" just isn’t convincing. It feels more like vanilla content without any substance (the main character comes off as a fake player if he’s into that mediocre performance).
The shortness of the chapters and the underdeveloped characters make me think this story was just a series of concepts a new writer wanted to explore, rather than a fully-fledged novel.
I’ll give +3 stars just for the translator’s hard work and dedication.
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One thing to note is that DDL leaves a few buffer links for upcoming chapters, which only have a template message on them. So, some extra checks might be needed before copying text over.
*Spoiler*
It ends with a happy ending (HE).
There are plot holes in the story, which, while common in some narratives, could have been better addressed for clarity. If the ending had been more polished and the plot holes resolved, I would have given the story a solid 5. Despite these issues, it was still a good read, and I recommend it to anyone looking for a new BL novel.
The first arc is decent, though it feels a bit weak—had it been more developed, it could have been fantastic.
I do love this type of main character (MC), and initially, I enjoyed his interactions with the system. However, these interactions became quite repetitive, just like the plot. A common pitfall of quick-transmigration (QT) novels is that each world can start to feel the same, which is exactly what happened here. It’s very much a rinse and repeat scenario.
I almost dropped the novel a couple of times because it's so illogical. While I can accept a certain level of fantasy, as it is fiction, the second and fourth arcs had me questioning the characters' intelligence. The authors seemed to be testing how far they could push the boundaries, and the actions of the characters were just too fantastical.
Additionally, I felt there wasn’t much chemistry between the MC and the male lead (ML). The ML is your typical obsessive, possessive yandere, but it’s hard to see how he became attracted to the MC, as little time is spent developing this aspect. The same goes for the MC; it’s difficult to understand how their feelings developed.
I don’t think I would recommend reading this novel unless you have a lot of free time and patience.
The author tries to portray the main character as a dramatic actor or sex enthusiast who enjoys forceful play, but the "play" just isn’t convincing. It feels more like vanilla content without any substance (the main character comes off as a fake player if he’s into that mediocre performance).
The shortness of the chapters and the underdeveloped characters make me think this story was just a series of concepts a new writer wanted to explore, rather than a fully-fledged novel.
I’ll give +3 stars just for the translator’s hard work and dedication.